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To The Sun (A Haiku)

The noonday sun
holds court in our galaxy
while earth spins her wheels


(5.24.06 - my first haiku)

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I was looking through your poems, when I came upon this small treasure. What a lovely first. It is always satisfying to the soul to accomplish something one has never done before. Take care. Love, Sandra
I love this Est. Evocative and contemplative. Justine
According to the paper this morning our Earth has three more planets to pal around with: Ceres, Xena (home of the Warrior Princess?) and Charon. Isn't it grand?
Left spinning in awe, a lovely wordsmith is you **ESTHER** love duncan X
Beautiful. But is a haiku strictly 5 syllables,7, then 5? Or just a wonderful idea expressed without excess? (in which case you have definitely succeeded) .- chuck
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