ALK ( / cape town, south africa)

To Whom It May Concern..

a darkness lit
an echo in my silence..
he became the peaceful dream, lapping at my un and conscious mind
-note though, through no fault of his own..

senses overlapping-i could taste colours, hear happiness and felt...
i felt...i f e l t..
i could feel again
- but please note, he was never aware..

attention gone
urgh salt in coffee
my life not my life
-but ladies and gentleman, to those concerned-he made no promises and i no assumptions..

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Comments (2)

This is a great poem thanks for sharing, I really liked the line an echo in my silence. great write
a very fine poem. i love your free form. amazing!