(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Totally Unkind

Totally unkind

Male or female members
They are all readers
Adorable and trustworthy
Very helpful and touchy

Many speak direct
Others through acts
Such as like and comments
But they are always present

Why have we such close bond?
Like fishes in vast pond
Swim from one place to another
And enjoy freedom there

I enjoy with free air
And present views very clear
My heart speaks and readers listen
What else can be called heaven?

"Sir, we wait for your poems"
I have no words to thank them
I write out of my passion
Try to be relevant with real situation

Nothing makes you to move
Or prove
When some artificiality enters mind
It makes your work totally unkind

by Hasmukh Amathalal

Comments (2)

Nothing makes you to move Or prove When some artificiality enters mind It makes your work totally unkind
Wow... Very real work. Honest and true. 5 hours ago by Sean Scribbles to Totally unkind