On Behalf Of The One

I have traveled to that place,
A place where I have been looking
For a significant Care.

I'm also satisfied with what I saw,
Opportune, faces of hope,
At first I was nervous,
My thought was...
I made mistake.
That turned out not.

I'm happy where I am now.
And I believed
That more states greater
Than my gains now.

I earnestly pray
To the maker of all,
That I will be successful
More success I have now.

On behalf of the one
Who unloaded my burden,
The One who reign of sacrifice.

I thank you, wholly
That springs in my heart.

Yes! You are the One Jesus.

by Didith Marcelo

Comments (1)

I picked this poem from the title Stuart, because I find people who post so many poem at a time, fit it perfectly. It puts people off sampling your work, because it is often the case that less is more in art, but in this instance, I was surprised, because this is a spine chiller of a poem. Very good atmosphere you produced in it's layout. 10 from Tai, A trying compulsion myself at times! lol