PIH (17/09/1987 / )

Away With Funeral Music

AWAY with funeral music - set
The pipe to powerful lips -
The cup of life's for him that drinks
And not for him that sips.

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Comments (7)

hey preets, nice write. 'Unappealing Blank Papers'-is quite an appealing poem. :) Beautifully rendered! Last two lines r indeed very striking.
life's dark when life's like 'kora kaagaz'.. amazing write up.. a new subject matter for me.. it was fun reading it.. awesome! ! keep it up.. smiles, krishna
Preeti can create something out of nothing-I find from this poem. Your imagination is very much on the high side.
kora kagaz...kora na rahega...you have talent preets...i know you will fill up books...love...nalini
Blank papers may be unappealing, but your poem is quite the opposite. You write with wisdom and great charm. Regards, Sandra
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