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Unconditional Surrender
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Unconditional Surrender

the lie

stole

truth's

virginity

savagely

ripping it

from the loins

dragging it

through
the murky mess

until at last

it screamed….

ENOUGH!

ENOUGH!

I SURRENDER!


(12-09-1976)

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Comments (2)

Murky masses wonderfully shared in this amazing sharing.....10
the lie stole virginity. pathetic and at last the surrender. in small verses you have pictured the pain and sorrow. thank you tony