MB (February 4,1989 / )

Unnoticed

I walk alone
along a long road
people walk by
not stoping to say hi
no one notices me walking
occationally people will look at me with an unspoken word
i keep walking
i feel so cold
so alone
most people walk in pairs
everyone has a counter part
a partner in crime
i always walk alone
always the same thing
day
after
day
im not sure there will ever be another one for me
i remember the days when i had someone waiting for me at every corner
some to stop and give me a hug
hold my hand
walk with me
kiss me
keep me company
now im alone
unnoticed
no one notices the tears on my cheeks
or the pain in my eyes
everyone just keeps going on with there every day things
more important then the 'strange girl'
who is always alone
always there with out anyone of her own
the pain in her eyes will never go away
i am never going to be noticed.

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Comments (2)

forget about all those other ppl...hey im not all that noticed either...but hey i know where my place is...i mean im not like in some 'group' or w/e at school...i kinda hang with ppl from all different 'groups' and yea i know your talking about not having a guy...i dont either, but hey it'll happen one day or another...this is how i see it, if someone wants you that badly, they'll come get you...i mean my ex was my first bf and i havent had one since him, and always asked me why not and i tell him well theres a few reasons, one being that if someone wants me, they'll come get me like you did, and b/c i dont think any guys at my school like me...most of them proll think of me as a friend rather then a gf, but w/e anyway its a good poem! and you'll be noticed one day soon! so no worries. Ashley
Yes, you are! Jeff