(15/07/56 / Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.)

'Until Her Soul Lies Naked Before Me(For Janice On This The Day Of Her Birth)

I celebrate
my lover's birthday

glorying in her
body

ravishing her senses
(she relishing my ravishing)

until her soul
lies naked before me

I making her anew
shaping her molecule by molecule

touch upon touch
creating her
kiss by kiss

until she exists
clothed in my love

dressed in her joy
this day of her

birth.

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Comments (2)

I remember me a poem called Create me anew - it is something about rebirth in someones love. You celebrate the rebirth, are you? Cheers, dear Janice created anew and Donall the creator ;) With love, one
Please give Janice a ravishing kiss from me. Hope you re-dress her afterwards, lol. A great tribute to a lovely lady. George (Barry)