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yet one more jagged line added to my scars
I dont know why
and i dont even care
i try not to cry
so that you wont stare

by Cynthia DeMoines

Comments (2)

Unfortunately I think this is becoming more and more common. Although your poem says you do not care.....I believe you do (otherwise, why write?) . Just so you know, you're not alone. I hope you continue to write and find peace Cynthia. Also, this is a very strong poem. It deserves a title. :) (How about ''One More Jagged Line'' (Even though I would like to think ''The LAst Jagged Line'' would be more appropriate for your case) :) Take care. Sincerely, Mary
Write it out and cry it out when you can, if this is a real voice (in the poem) . Holding it in is what kills. And........ thereishelp.