A Moment In This Time

I love you
I dont think I fully understand
This transition in time yet
But it is amazing
It is wonderful
I cant express it in words
And truly I am thankful to you
I am happy for us
As a team
Partners in crime
A Crazy Club of Two
I cant believe it myself..

by Life Or Death Poetry

Comments (4)

I intended an ode talks about Planned Parenthood and how things you intend don't always happen.
I intended an ode talks about Planned Parenthood and how things you intend don't always happen. The part with Rose further supports this analogy.
Its good when its talking about the comparisons between an ode and a sonnet. The rest of the poem doesn't make much sense and the analogies don't coincide. The part about Rose does nothing to add to the poem and in my opinion should be taken out.
Fantastic vacillation between Ode and Sonnet. The existing mal-function of life which occasionally getting imbalance with tears and trauma. Excellent intention of exposing the intensity of living. Unique.............Pranab k c 10++