Vicarious Pleasure

Poem By Rini Shibu

Saplings and trees so wild and mysterious
You took me to the magical woods
Twisted roots and mossy rocks
Enchanted my imagination
Vicarious pleasure which you provided
Lying  on those mustard flowers
Promises we made
To make our dreams a reality..
Walking on your footsteps early in the morning
Through those wooden footbridge
Sound of water underneath
Glimpse of mountain ranges under bright blue sky
Nightingale singing songs of love
Far across the meadows
Where Sheeps  rearing 
Smell of steam still in the air
Our first journey along those valleys
Fabulous view of Castles, hamlets and church bells through the oaks
Beautiful flowers by the river side
Moments that takes me to wistful mood.

Comments about Vicarious Pleasure

Very deep and passionate poem. I loved the visionary impact of flow of your rendition. A beautiful creation written from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Rini.
Love and nature combine to produce a wonderful poem.
Lying on those mustard flowers Promises we made To make our dreams a reality.... //..... A fascinating landscape which transports the reader into a truly enchanting world even if it brings vicarious pleasure. Thanks a lot, Rini, with a bunch of good wishes.
Simply splendid poem of the day, dear Ma’am Rini. Congratulations for being selected....10++++
" Walking on your footsteps" How very beautiful. Wonderful to read.


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