Voice In The Wilderness

'Voice of a Wildebeast? ' she said......
She sort of spat it out
Her lined brow furrowed

by Lucy Burrow Click to read full poem

Comments about Voice In The Wilderness

Chinedu Dike 12 Feb 2018 12:30
An interesting narrative piece that leaves the reader with an enigma to ponder. A nice creation Lucy.
Sona Wilae 10 Feb 2018 11:20
This is an incredible poem! I love the the entire imagery! Awesome!
Richard Wlodarski 10 Feb 2018 02:08
Funny. Touching. Beautifully written. Lucy, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
James McLain 10 Feb 2018 10:15
Lucy, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain
Edward Kofi Louis 10 Feb 2018 04:07
Above her nodding head! ! Thanks for sharing.
Tom Allport 10 Feb 2018 03:47
a wonderful story poem about a misunderstanding by a loved one? .......................well written Lucy
Bernard F. Asuncion 10 Feb 2018 01:54
Luch, such a great poem of the day... big congrats and a huge 10+++++
Geoffrey Fafard 10 Feb 2018 01:08
Lucy. This is such a good poem displaying your ability to describe a situation, a humorous misunderstanding that tells us so much about who you are and where you live. Brilliant. Deserving of poem of the day...Cheers Geoffrey.
Rajaram Ramachandran 30 Nov 2005 10:06
'I said I am a VOICE IN THE WILDERNESS'.................. Every sub-conscious mind receives a voice in the wilderness, which is nothing but the God's commandments from one's own heart. God lives in every heart, who speaks the truth always, but the man doen't act according to the dictates of his conscience, his life ending in disappointment and failure on such occasions.
Ernestine Northover 12 Nov 2005 02:25
Oh Lucy, what a lovely ending to this one, I am slightly hard of hearing due to my thyroid packing up, and I know exactly how one can miss hear! ! ! Like grapes for plates! Bless your Gran, she's obviously got a good imagination. Sincerely Ernestine