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Beetee Vibhaavaree Jaag Ree
SA (19 Mar 1979 / KGF, India)

Beetee Vibhaavaree Jaag Ree

Poem By Jaishankar Prasad

Alone I fought, its battles till now
When peace returned I looked for love
Flowery carpets and destinations new
Awaits me…but I wait for you!

Long and lonely trip I can’t make
Time and seasons passed without break
I stood there longing to see your smile
Wanting your company to walk this mile!

Winced as castles opened their doors
Fretted to step on those marbled floors
For you I am waiting devotedly so
If heaven calls, I would say no!

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Comments (8)

I was utterly shocked when I read this... for I wrote something along these lines (and misplaced it a long while ago) ... but your words are much more beautiful and apt what can one expect with a master craftsman at work? well done seema.
Your way of writing love is enthralling. write aw many as you can to enthuse people. you may think of posting your image in your profile, to be more be fitting to readers.
10 for this marvelous poem. Love it.
Strong and beautiful end, dear poet Seema. You really love! You deny heaven and marbles, cause for you love is the ideal. Thanks for sharing I give you a 10+. Bravo Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded