Waiting For Paradise

Poem By Mien Bless

Its the way I feel, and I just cant deny
I fell in love with girl so fine
My reason for perfection, my path to paradise

You and me, we could have been one
For ever and ever, and beyond
For the price of a simple smile
I would have got you the world, and that's no lie

Now I lie awake, under these stormy skies
Waiting for the sun to rise
To show me the way to paradise
Paradise lost in the dark of your stormy eye

Comments about Waiting For Paradise

This is a lovely thread, sounding so melodious and flowing so spontaneously. Good luck!
This is a lovely thread, sounding so melodious and flowing so spontaneously. Good luck!


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