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Waterfall At Lu-Shan
(701-762 / Chu / Kazakhstan)

Waterfall At Lu-Shan

Poem By Li Po

Sunlight streams on the river stones.
From high above, the river steadily plunges--

three thousand feet of sparkling water--
the Milky Way pouring down from heaven.

Li T'ai-po
tr. Hamil

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It's a lovely poem but I would make it a bit longer than that, but it is an amazing poem ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
its nice.. but too short. But u have natural ability for poems, just make them long (at least 4 paragraphs)
.............lovely poem with beautiful imagery โ˜…
Short and Sweet i love it


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