Waterfall Of Hopes*

take me along, when it happens
if the stars and your dreams
and the waterfall of hopes that
defines you so permit
for regardless of
the magnolia and azure
that I drape myself in
my journeys get entangle
in algae of 'green' and can't break free

* Inspired by Deana & christended by Roger Cornish thanks :)

by Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin

Comments (12)

for regardless of the magnolia and azure that I drape myself in Rachel Ann Butler
''that I drape myself in my journeys get entangle in algae of 'green' and can't break free '' a lovely poem...a dearest poet...10+++
excellent write rehan! ! my my the way you bgin this one is like an old friend taking you by the arm and gently falling in stride alongside you....very soulful and wistful all at the same time...10!
This piece i feel more poetic than other one.
To me this poem brings a feeling of being around someone, say a good friend, who has great dreams, and just knowing that there dreams will send them rocketing across the sky while I’m stuck mired in the mud. Not that I find your poem sad, no quite the opposite; and that, that makes it very, very interesting.
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