Worth Trying

Worth trying
Monday,13th May 2019

It was never a question
whether you mention
or not with faith
I shall be with you till the death

we met
and shared the date
from that day on
you have always shown the way

When I look in your eyes
I feel it is worth trying
to remain and be part
you are such a wonderful person in possession of human art

I have always thought
and many times got caught
by your sharp intelligence
still I took a chance

I am proud to be with you
and shall pass through
any kind of rough weather
and usher in a happy future

Hasmukh Mehta

by Hasmukh Amathalal

Comments (2)

Added to my poem list
i think i've found it! yay! there are some other poems with a similar title in your list. i LIKE the parentheses around this title, in a rather suggestive formation. Lalitha says too heavy. ha ha. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - this part i already sent as a message: J, it feels the face is red it's buldged blue veins. no d in bulged. i'll change it. nice try! ;) i honestly don't know if it's or its is what you want here, so it is staying it's as in it is. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - bulge bəlj/ verb past tense: bulged; past participle: bulged swell or protrude to an unnatural or incongruous extent. the veins in his neck bulged synonyms: swell, stick out, puff out, balloon (out) , bug out, fill out, belly, distend, tumefy, intumesce; More project, protrude, stand out his eyes were bulging be full of and distended with. a briefcase bulging with documents===================================== - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The splitting of the hips when quite, she is naught..............maybe you DO want quite or quit or quiet. i don't know, so i leave it alone. - - - - - - - - - both rings I often come too know. ....too or to? i'll put it in as is and wait for any instructions from you, the author, before i change anything. ;) NO, I CHANGED MY MIND! i'll take d out of 'buldge' and change the recent too to to, hoo-hoo! i guess this has something to do with a man and a woman and wind and water and whatever. interesting, which word is a COP OUT on my part, but, HEY, i deserve a rest! ha ha [ok, i also think it is a scene out of a porn movie! ] some Readers will probably say that's exactly the way i feel sometimes! bri :) this shall go into November's showcase, Section C, asap. thanks ========================================================== i'll use this version in the showcase. and to MyPoemList bri :)