Antes Que Muero (Haiku)

Antes Que Muero (Haiku)

Antes que muero
Me gustaria ir a
Guadalajara

. 6/10/2017

by Edwin Tanguma

Comments (1)

Hi Ashok, You started off writing about love and lost your way........ So you end up writing neither of love nor life..... Milk gone sour...you still can get cheese out of it...try! 2. Writing in upper case amounts to shouting..... put it in lower case.