MS (7-31-83 / Newport News, Virginia)

When I'M With You

The beauty of the ocean
Could never compare -
To the beauty I find
In the sea of your eyes.

The amazing mountains
The breath taking view,
Pale in the light
Of your every sight.

The sweetness of honey
Is bitter in my mouth,
When placed beside
Your sweet embrace.

The vastness of this sphere
Shrinks when I think of you,
The never ending stars,
Diminish when I'm with you.

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Comments (4)

Very good poem with great rhythm - beautiful imagery! ! Thank you, RoseAnn
very nice and awesome poem..good job
Your ability with words is overwhelming Although all of them are beautiful, this one is my absolute favorite of the poems you wrote me. It always makes me realize what an awesome guy I have. ~your Tabba
wow this one was also very beautiful i loved the way u described what she is to you..it was wonderful~Hazel