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When Suicidal Becomes Suicide

Thick black lines with heavens
embrace
It's hard to tell its hell I
face
Condemed to die a sinners
love
A conceiled tear from someone
above
One slice of anger out flew
fear
Secretly killing the one held so
near
Last white linen covered the
stain
But couldn't mask this child's hidden
pain

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Comments (3)

it says i have to enter 20 characters. so.. a-freaking-mazing, miss wire. <3
Hey Rebecca, this is a really really good poem, I really like it because I can connect to it. Thank you.
That's a touching poem, I hope that child is going to be alright. great work Rebecca, smiles N hugs, Rissa