NC (7/1/93 / Banbury)

When You Are With Me

When you are with me i become happy,
you are by my side when i need you,
everytime you call me you are with me.
i know when you go away you are,
still going to be with me by
my side each time you go away.

User Rating: 4,8 / 5 ( 2 votes ) 3

Comments (3)

a really nice poem..i liked it alot, keep up the good work!
hey Nathan, this is a wonderfull poem..I like it..But my truely opion-make it a bit longer, because it starts interesting, and then suddenly it stops..The readers want to read more/further. thanks. P.s i gave you a 9/10
a nice poem for happines 'when you are with me' -10 anjali