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When You Feel Me

Poem By sara wiliams

I see the sun
shines in my hair
when your hands
is it's dress

I climb your happiness
and pass the lands
that make me cry
that make me cry

such a big lie
love once and once
such a big lie
happens just twice

love lives in me
I fly this time
over the clouds
of your deep love

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I see the sun shines in my hair when your hands is it's dress.........................most beautiful imagery i am yet to find that carries with it with every thing implecit, thanks for sharing
Well done, Sara...Mellifluous structure...i like the repetition inthe 2nd stanza...it compliments the serene tone you establish from the start-up... ~ FjR ~


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