Love Note 561

A very good afternoon
to you my sweet beautiful girl.
I have been thinking of you
as I've gona along getting
some stuff done that I've needed to.
I wish you could be here to spend
the rest of this day spending time
in each others company as I finished
up a few things that I need,
and then we could sit down my love
and get to wrapping some
Christmas presents to get under the tree,
then snuggle up tight
to share some sweet kisses and relax
while watching a film and snuggling tight.
I will be dreaming of all this with you
as I get back to my chores in a few.
I hope that next Christmas time
I will be doing holiday things
and so very much more with you
having a great time with the woman
I so truly love.

by Michael P. McParland

Comments (8)

Excellent poem..... Thanks for sharing.....
This is a compelling narrative; the precision of the writing and the cadence produce a suspense that carries the reader along to the luminous final four stanzas. Satisfying and substantial.
Problems of no clean, wisely written, thank you for sharing the poem with us
She learned. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
a very nice clean poem that tells an interesting story.
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