While, Children Need More

Those small town country roads.. Sure
aren't what they used to be anymore. Too
many cars, too bars, can't see the lake
shore... No woods left to explore... Too
many people, too many stores. While children
need more..

by Rebecca Navarre

Comments (4)

Thank You! ! ! Soul, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Deep And Powerful! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Touches Readers Hearts And Souls! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
Thank You! ! ! Richard, For Such A Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Beautifully Touches Heart And Mind! ! ! ! ! Powerfully And Deep! ! ! ! ! With Life And Nature Inner Twinned! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
Great words, you use it better for good messages..thats what a writer should do! :) :) Nice one Becca
You hit the nail on the head, Rebecca! Soon, it will be a concrete jungle everywhere!