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SB (08-07-1982 / nottingham)

Why

i remember all the times we spent together
now we don't even talk to each other
we were such great friends
when we tried something new
everything changed
we were such great friends
we decided to give one more step
from friends to couple
from hugs to kisses
from laughs to smiles
from jokes to love poems
now we don't have none of this
i ask myself why?
how could all of this end
if we were such good friends

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 3 votes ) 5

Comments (5)

You write this sad poem well. You get your feelings across in your writting very well, as you express your disappointment. Hopefully you will be uploading some more poems.10/10.
I can totally relate to your situation described in the poem. I've been there and it's not worth it. Such extremes! Thanks for sharing. Your voice has been heard.
You rhymed very well...A little bit of sadness and strong feelings! Great work!
this is sad indeed..and you have expressed yourself very well
from friends to couple from hugs to kisses from laughs to smiles from jokes to love poems...............yet uniquely passionate, utterly persuasive, love reminds mirth of being juxtaposed, a luscious flow across lucidity,10+++, thanks for sharing