JTC (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Why Do I Love You, Sir?

why do I love You, Sir?
the mountain that returns my voice
adding a longing quality to it
why do i love You, Sir?
the ripples in the lake
a sudden burst of poetic lines
in the calm of my heart
as the wind blows past
my existence that hinges
onto the gravity of earth
which has moved its axis into you
why do I love You, Sir?
the spaceman who longs for
the earth's possessive pull
after the confusion with lightness
magnetic pull that sends
each of of the cells hungry
for home, your touch, scent, youthful voice
Why do I love You, Sir?
the laps of the waves
the answer keeps swarming my heart
before they hit land

inspired by

Why do I love' You, Sir?
Wgt do I love' You, Sir?
The Wind does not require the Grass
To answer—Wherefore when He pass
She cannot keep Her place.
Because He knows—and
Do not You—
And We know not—
Enough for Us
The Wisdom it be so—
The Lightning—never asked an Eye
Wherefore it shut—when He was by—
Because He knows it cannot speak—
And reasons not contained—
—Of Talk—
There be—preferred by Daintier Folk—
The Sunrise—Sire—compelleth Me—
Because He's Sunrise—and I see—
I love Thee—
Emily Dickinson

by john tiong chunghoo

Comments (1)

Well at least you acknowledge her in your poem since u r using her exact title. I wrote mine in 1987 before i discovered her fanatastic work u quote above. I do like what you wrote. i have a body of work here on poemhunter too. Invite your comments.Nicely done above.