Winter Mornings

Winter mornings
Misty dawns
Shivering sunshine
Dew drops on lawns

Little Birds
They're All puffed up
Barren trees
They Do Look tough

Canvass of
Winter skies
Colours splashed
With many dyes

I might shiver
In my shoes
Heart still happy
Have no blues

Winter times
Are such a treat
In nature's arms
Time to retreat

by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

Comments (9)

winter times, are such treat! In nature's arms, time to retreat. ....... and timer also for Naturre to retreatt. wonderful imagery. Thank. you for sharing.
'Winter mornings Misty dawns Shivering sunshine Dew drops on lawns' absolutely love this and 'Canvass of Winter skies Colours splashed With many dyes' I love and delight in the innocent of your words, seeing through the beauty of your imagination
Dear Nalini, Fantastic poem. You make me nostalgic of my winters in Delhi. Although my asthma gets worse during winter, after an arduous summer we used to look forward to the onset of winter and all the festivals that winter brings with itself. My favourite season, in spite of the hazards it causes to my health. In South, there is no winter worth the name, you know. If I may suggest, the last word in the 12th line could be changed to hues, although you would miss the rhyme. Just a suggestion. Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem. Continue writing.
this poem made me miss winter. its my favorite season
the description of winter panorama is wonderful.......full 10 points to you..
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