If Only

Poem By Christian Eliab Ratnam

Today is March 9th. Yes the NINTH! Do you hear?
Here's a record of last comment I've had. Oh dear!

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[[ Date & Time: 3/5/2020 7: 44: 00 AM

Poem: 37007968 - Being Old: The Advantages And Disadvantages....... [(See The Title) : Long; Personal? ; Humour? ]

From Member: Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Comment: The poem is a a clear mirror of advantages and disadvantage of old age though a satire ]]

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Sixth,7th,8th,9th, yikes! Four days between the 2!
Does such injustice happen also, to you, You, or YOU? ?

To be truthful, it bothers me little IF...I just drink a
bottle of booze, my head lowered down in kitchen sink, ..

which once inspired my poem: "Better Than A Toilet"!
If I move to another site, COULD I start THERE anew?

Perhaps I'd get MORE comments, avoid the P-H squalor.
But this site IS free, and another may cost a dollar!


Comments about If Only

It is better than a toilet Though I hate to spoil it The sink is completely dry Just like the humor from bri.
This poem itself is sweet cool in lament, ah this site you have to really ask for comments. And it's a bit hard and lengthy sometimes to find a poet's new poems. Kudos for a fantastic poem, hope u r ok! ! Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'the corona catastrophe '
'Woe is Me ' is really a riddle- -Do you mean'Who is Me? 'Have you moved to another Site? I f assume.We are missing your humour.
You are not unread, dear poet. Many people do Read your poems, and I can see Some rate them too. Hearing your lament, Here I come to read your poem, And make a comment!
Bri, this is your LATEST poem, posted clear back on the ninth of March! Are you all right? I hope the virus doesn't have you down! Read my poems " In an Unusual Place" and " Avoiding the Corona" . They will cheer you up!

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