DG (9/19/1963 / )

Wrap It Up,97

WRAP it up,
call it to a
halt, let it slip
away, like the
wind and clouds,
WRAP it up, lets
call it a night, the
bottles are empty,
and the candles ,
out, out, out.
WRAP it up, call
it to a halt, let it slip
away, like the wind
and clouds.

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Comments (1)

Very creative, David. I get the feeling when I read this poem it is a bit sad. Wrap it up call it a halt slip away, away like the wind and clouds. It almost like put it aside and forget about it or discard it as it drifts away. Wind and clouds drift and to myself I would percieve this as something discarded something. Maybe I am wrong. Excellent poem Take care.