(04 October 1943 / Germany)

Yes, Is It? (Haiku)

So, what is envy?
Is it the child of hatred,
or simply nothing?


by Herbert Nehrlich

Comments (6)

A wonderful haiku this time! Must agree with the others!
I like this one Herbie darling what about the other 547 PIECES.
Yes, Herbert. This is most definately it. Well done. You got there in the end.
Gypsy, is this more like it? I am a bit slow with this. H
Excellent Herbert! I have no idea what you're talking about but it sounds brilliant! (Just joking, honest) . Seriously though, apart from the typo (please amend imediately) , This would be a perfect haiku if it had 17 syllables instead of 18 and if it was 1st line 5 syllables,2nd line 7 syllables and 3rd line 5 syllables. Then it would be perfect. Yours always Gypsy
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