...You Amaze Me

more... i heard
your passion
pigmenting new desire
as sweet as grapes
on summer breeze
crystallizing
to glimpse of sunshine

when dry leaves
separate from vines
gently fluttering to gravity
unwilling to touch ground
i focus my eyes on you
looking at your inner soul
finding my way deep
that only you
could keep
but i insist
you’re remarkable

by Manonton Dalan

Comments (11)

Dear Sir Poet, marakep ya tula so ginawa yu salamat ya baled, diane
The poem is really amazing.
Very unique poetic diction! Luvz it!
Superb poem, I liked it.....my pick from your poem....10 i focus my eyes on you looking at your inner soul
A remarkable poem, very well written, stems from the heart of a romantic person. Thank you, RoseAnn
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