DG (9/19/1963 / )

You Better Fix This Wound Before I Pack Up And Go

I need you to love me,
when im feeling slow.
I need you to hold me,
when it gets to cold.
I need you to listen,
and brake my fall.
YOU better clean this
wound, before i pack up
and go.
I need you to touch me,
with your body and words,
I need you to say, our
love is stronger, then
this cold, cold blow.
YOU better clean this
wound, before i pack up
and go.

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Comments (5)

WELL SAID, I LOVED YOUR POEM! VICKY
i like it... raw and young and no apologies for expectations... i find myself apologizing for expectations... but i also see there was so much more that wasn't said
I hope all works well in your soul so the infection does capture every cell in your being then, then no hope left a glimmer now the touch possible if this poem does what its supposed to do
found this in my guiter case, wrote it about ten years ago............
Love from a man's point of view, very clearly stated in this force to be reckoned with poem David. I think there is a 'to' in there that should be 'too' Nice work. 9 from Tai