JD ( / onoe, New York)

You'Re Who I Need

You may try.
You may succeed.
You will cry.
But you're still the one I need.

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Hi Kelly, I just wanted to help you with one thing: 'Your' should be you're because it is the proper contraction for you are. Not that it is any massive deal. Everybody knows what you mean. But since it appears in both the title and the poem I thought it worth mentioning. Regards, Mike
This one isnt very good so sorry for whoever reads it