YL ( / Dipolog City)

You, You And You

out of the blue
every individual have something else to do
even though they are busy finding something new
yet there is a big question of you

you did not know what to do
keeps on walking without knowing so
watching the haggard people on there view
searching his entire soul to renew

touching every corner of your face
as you do not grasp each and passing days
you just only wish a straight ace
that's exactly you needed to win the race

User Rating: 5 / 5 ( 0 votes ) 3

Comments (3)

lovely poem u needed to win the race... good imagination
touching every corner of your face as you do not grasp each and passing days you just only wish a straight ace that's exactly you needed to win the race. ..beautiful lines are created in this poem..grace
'touching every corner of your face as you do not grasp each and passing days you just only wish a straight ace that's exactly you needed to win the race' A marvelous poem with nice ending,10+++