MN (January 13 / )

Your Eyes

Why does my world revolve around you?
Smaller, tighter,
I can’t seem to get away.
You’re just another black hole,
Threatening to swallow me deeper into your depths.

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And their eyes meet across the room...another great pinpointing of a common emotion, darling. The 'black hole' metaphor is apt, and your first line is a fantastic 'grabber'. Well done.