"Your Eyes".. Said He

"Your eyes" said he "are two fish that play
In the sweet ocean of my deep love"
"Thanks" said she.."hope sweet ocean of love
Turns not brine to outpour from my eyes"

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In the sweet ocean of deep love, eyes wonderfully reflect vision of sweetness and caring. Turning the page once again love revives trust. This amazing poem attracts attention for revisiting this.
lovely reply fish are not reliable and brine is oceanery so kick such guys maybe who tell lies..ma'am did you not read my two poems MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TO DAY AS A MOM LIKE THEM YOU MAY HELP ME TRANSLATE THEM IN YOUR LANGUAGE MANY HAVE THANKS IN ADVANCE
The eyes say it all. Nice poem.++10
A beautiful metaphorical poem on eyes and love has been astutely and incisively delineated. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem.10
Beautiful poem about eyes and tears
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