Your Gone #3

I miss you
That day was the day that I broke down
That day I died inside
My heart got ripped out
I was distoryed
I fell into pieces
Like a house broke down
Untill I grew a bit older
I had feelings once more
Then I died again
Distoryed once more
Finaly had a urge to kill myself
But I didn't
I came through just like you

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Comments (1)

A very inspiring write silent one, a couple of typos to sort out, but otherwise a great poem. It is amazing the power of love and human resolve to survive. You express it so well here. Smiling at you, Aciiiiiiid Test