PIH (17/09/1987 / )

Zzzz Confession

There's a Thought crowding my mind
Explaination to which i cannot find.
To Love or Not To Love that is the question,
Please don't leave, hear my confession.

In Love i was, but not anymore,
Listen up, my heart will pour.
You Left me, Still don't know why....
I can't help but cry and cry.

Thinking all this while our love was true,
If only i knew,
Dreams will break in time,
don't fall in love, it's a crime!

You've disapperared from my life
Though the memories are still rife.
Wish i had known from the start
that you were playing with my heart.

You are no more synonymous with me,
Don't go chaeting another woman, just coz now you are free.
Believe me, it hurts, so I am here to say,
Now that I'm outta you, I can get through the day.


(Written on November 05,2005)

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Comments (4)

I was going thru ur poems and was reading this... but I do not why I re-read it again and again.... I feel and can imagine the way you fell whilst writing this one... there is pain... but I admire the way you have painted them with your words....10/10
DATPREETS A PREETI ARTFUL POET.....'' YOU ARE NO LONGER SYNONOMOUS WITH ME ''...AWESOME LINE...BETTER GET A COPYRT. 'FORE ME STEALS IT 30 YRS. FROM NOW WHENCE YIR NOT ' LOOKIN' ME WAY...GREAT WRITE...IO!
Beautiful expression of sadest emotions, good work from an young mind. Good wishes.
Strong sentiment and a fair write. I found the switch to lazy words (coz and outta) to be grating as they just seemed out of context to the rest of the piece. Also there seemed to be a good rythym going with the first verse but that then seemed to vanish. Still a good work overall. Cheers.