Shauna Stoltz Comments (3)

I believe the poem you quoted by your great grandfather was written by the brother of my great grandfather. Was you ancestor Perry Green Luzader? Mine was his brother, John Michael Luzader.
this poem is inspiring. thankyou for putting it up. NOT
'My Heart' is a good poem. But as you progress as a writer, you want to try to avoid cliches and use more creative metaphors and smilies. For example, 'every time I see you, my heart melts away' could be written 'my heart melts like a lit candle when you grace me with your Romeo-like presence' or something like that. But it comes with time. Good luck! -Michael