I Remember, I Remember
The Lay Of The Laborer
Collette Anne Kearns
07 Oct 2015 10:49
My Mother loved this poem. the last few lines made her sad though. She would often comment that the speaker should have been closer to Heaven the older he became.
23 Sep 2014 07:32
You show some promise, but the archaic language lets you down. Try to read some good contemporary poets and expand your thoughts without the restriction of form.
04 Oct 2009 03:26
what a meaningful poem that taught me the meaning of sacrifice, the woman decided to make a song of her pains to make the rich happy although the song will never reach the rich