A Winter Night
11 Oct 2005 05:32
I enjoyed ur poems and if you do also then that is all that matters. The rest like value, use of words and phrase's and clarity will change for you as you gain more experience in life and at ur age you have many years to build up in your mind what you want ur poetry to express. ur at the age when relationships should be enjoyed and do not rush into a comittment that after a few years is no turning out as you expected. Eighteen is a wonder age and you will have many relationships as you go thru life and ur perspective will change as you change. Get ur education first so you can take care of yourself and be a discriment about life and what you want from it. Good luck and is it poet for both genders or do we recognize the word poetess.Chow Chuck
06 Oct 2005 02:37
I'm just hoping people will give me advice and tell me what I need to fix on my poems. And don't forget about telling me if they liked my poems or not.